+2
You aren't bad, but I didn't like the second or third on your list. They all seem to be streams of consciousness, and not really story-driven. I love characters and stories, and I don't know what either of those are in those two shorts.
And I take issue with the whole "flicker flicker grainy" thing. I don't see a need to make it look like crap without a definite reason.
Sorry.
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Thanks again, Mr Portridge.