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Im writing a script and heres the storyline
A man named Jared wells basically hates the world. everytime he sees something bad happen even if its not that bad he vomits. One day while walking to go get coffee he witnesses a man being killed. While Drinking his coffee he sees a man get beaten by a few kids on the street. Overwelmed he runs home and locks himself in his basement for a few months. His girlfriend Scarlett who lives with him gets worried and tries to bring him outside but her attempts fail. While Jared is locking himself in his basement hes secretley working on a pill that if takien while transport him to a world where it is perfect and nothing bad happens. One day he comes out of His basement and tests the pill. Everytime he tries it a different result comes through but not the one he wanted. Instead of things getting better they only keep getting worse with brief moments of happiness. On his so called last attempt he goes into a fogey world where he finds a trail of blood leading to his upstairs bedroom. Inside the bedroom is Scarlett on the bed dead. Out of Desperation, he takes one more pill in which he is transported to a world in which he is holding Scarletts hand at gunpoint. He gives hear a look and smiles and then the gun clicks and the movie ends.
What does everyone think?
A man named Jared wells basically hates the world. everytime he sees something bad happen even if its not that bad he vomits. One day while walking to go get coffee he witnesses a man being killed. While Drinking his coffee he sees a man get beaten by a few kids on the street. Overwelmed he runs home and locks himself in his basement for a few months. His girlfriend Scarlett who lives with him gets worried and tries to bring him outside but her attempts fail. While Jared is locking himself in his basement hes secretley working on a pill that if takien while transport him to a world where it is perfect and nothing bad happens. One day he comes out of His basement and tests the pill. Everytime he tries it a different result comes through but not the one he wanted. Instead of things getting better they only keep getting worse with brief moments of happiness. On his so called last attempt he goes into a fogey world where he finds a trail of blood leading to his upstairs bedroom. Inside the bedroom is Scarlett on the bed dead. Out of Desperation, he takes one more pill in which he is transported to a world in which he is holding Scarletts hand at gunpoint. He gives hear a look and smiles and then the gun clicks and the movie ends.
What does everyone think?
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" I see in your eyes, the same fear that would take the heart of me. A day may come when the courage of men fails, whe we forsake our friends and break all bonds of fellowship, but it is not this day. May and hour of wolves and shattered shields before the age of men comes crashing down, but it is not this day! This day we Fight! For all that you hold dear on this good earth, I bid you stand men of the west!!"
-Aragorn: The Lord of the Rings the Return of the King
" I see in your eyes, the same fear that would take the heart of me. A day may come when the courage of men fails, whe we forsake our friends and break all bonds of fellowship, but it is not this day. May and hour of wolves and shattered shields before the age of men comes crashing down, but it is not this day! This day we Fight! For all that you hold dear on this good earth, I bid you stand men of the west!!"
-Aragorn: The Lord of the Rings the Return of the King
