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I've been working on this theatre production idea and was hoping to get honest feedback. This hasn't been copyrighted and would rather that no one would steal it, assuming it's worth that
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28 days...6 hours...42 minutes...12 seconds
I like the story and the setting works in its favour. You can see some of the plot unfold before it does in the narrative. You also have a bit too much description here for just an idea. I understand you have the whole thing laid out but just give tidbits here and there, not the whole grand scheme of things.

For a presentation though, this should be a lot cleaner and read more like a stage play. People don't really want to read a jumbled mess, so I would break things up to make it easier on the eyes.

In the end, I liked it.
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You already wrote that out as a play and posted it somewhere on this forum.