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I have an idea, but I don't know if I want to say it, because I don't know if I want to keep it for myself or not.
So I'm going to come up with a different one that I hurriedly wrote one day for a writing contest on another forum.
The basic idea is that there is man who is extremely protective of himself, keeps himself locked into his apartment, rarely leaving it. From out one of his windows he can see this girl walk too and from work every day, and he becomes infatuated with her. So he hires a private investegator to follow her.
All that stuff was pre-story that the audience can assume if they want to, but they won't find out.
What the audience will see is the private investagator dropping things off at the guys apartment, old receipts, letters, bills, magazines, hair, basically whatever is thrown out. The guys uses it to put together this odd puzzle of his to try and find out as much about the girl as possible. Eventually he has a solid collection of stuff and he goes out and buys up everything that the girl likes. From the P.I. he knows where she works and what she does after work, so he makes sure to be at this coffee shop before she shows up, taking her seat at her table, basically mimicing everything that she does. She comes into the coffee shop and he eventually introduces himself and they have a nice little conversation. When she has to go and catch her bus, he makes up some excuse as to why he should go with her (in my original version it is because someone was mugged at that bus stop not to long ago), and as they walk out he starts to act a little creepy (towards her), but so that she doesn't realize it, and there is a voice over of his thoughts, which are also creepy.
It comes out a little bit better when written down completely.
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"As I was walking up the stair,
I met a man who wasn't there.
He wasn't there again today,
I wish, I wish he'd go away."
-From Identity