[quote=Mary Loquacious]Sadie!  How the hell are ya, biznitch?  :D   I haven't gotten to talk to you in for-ev-[i]ver[/i]![/quote]

[quote=Mary Loquacious]I liked it very much.  It reminds me a bit of [i]The Thing[/i] mixed with [i]Dr. Strangelove[/i], only with a woman in the mix to complicate things.  :D

Depressed the hell out of me.  The ending is good--I think it's the only way you could really end it.  

And I agree--Allison's v-o is problematic.  My advice would be to minimize it, or get rid of it altogether.  Or maybe have her talk about something else?  Not sure.[/quote]

[quote=The Silver Bullet]Oh yeah, 'cos revising's fun...

Meanwhile, how many words in are you? How about %-wise? I just find it interesting.

Meanwhile, I agree.
He is so Colin it's not funny.

What'd you think?[/quote]

[quote=Mary Loquacious]I'm fine, my dearest boy.  :laugh:

I'm revising, which makes me happy.  :yup:[/quote]

[quote=The Silver Bullet]Sigh.

How are you my darling?

;D[/quote]

[quote=Mary Loquacious][i]I'm the poo of the antelope
That flows onto the ground
Becomes the grass of tomorrow
(Yeah)
Which the grazers turn around
So I'm the leg of a leopard
and the wing of a hen
Which becomes dinner for the humans
and turns back to poo again

That's the circle
The circle of poo...[/i]

:laugh:[/quote]

[quote=The Silver Bullet][QUOTE]No HTML, bud...otherwise some smarta** could stick a JavaScript-based redirect in there, ya' know?[/QUOTE]

And as Scott has shown us, people will try it...

:laugh: [/quote]

[quote=Naisy]Hey chris, long time no see. ever since lightning struck our roof and blew up our modem we have been waiting for a new one, so i can only use the school computers, now the holidays are over![/quote]

[quote=Yoda]No HTML, bud...otherwise some smarta** could stick a JavaScript-based redirect in there, ya' know? :)[/quote]

[quote=Scott Parks]test test. test.[/quote]

[quote=The Silver Bullet]:laugh: 

Yes.[/quote]