The Shoutbox
so Parks does it taste good? the things you can find in this shoutbox will never cease to amaze me
What the hell?
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Crab-Cheese Dip
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2 cans (6 1/2 oz. each) crabmeat

1 container (8 oz.) creamed cottage cheese

2 tbsp. mayonnaise

1 tbsp. prepared mustard

1 tbsp. lemon juice

1/2 tsp. salt

Parsley

Twisted lemon slices

Drain crabmeat thoroughly. Reserve reddest pieces for garnish. Put remaining half in container of electric blender with cheese, mayonnaise, mustard, lemon juice and salt. Whirl until blended. Place in bowl and garnish with remaining crabmeat, parsley, lemon slices.
baseball?
Nomar: 3 home runs and 8 RBI on his birthday. Manny hit two bombs, by the way. Told ya' he makes a significant difference.

BoSox win 22-4.
Blip blip bloop bloop bloop.
Had a bit of technical problems... but I'm back to where I once belonged.
I'm good, Skank! What happened to you all the sudden...I just spilled some juicy details in your PM!!
Sadie! How the hell are ya, biznitch? I haven't gotten to talk to you in for-ev-ver!
I liked it very much. It reminds me a bit of The Thing mixed with Dr. Strangelove, only with a woman in the mix to complicate things.

Depressed the hell out of me. The ending is good--I think it's the only way you could really end it.

And I agree--Allison's v-o is problematic. My advice would be to minimize it, or get rid of it altogether. Or maybe have her talk about something else? Not sure.
Oh yeah, 'cos revising's fun...

Meanwhile, how many words in are you? How about %-wise? I just find it interesting.

Meanwhile, I agree.
He is so Colin it's not funny.

What'd you think?