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BEAR
08-11-03, 03:41 AM
www.geocities.com/dansoddworld


Hey. The website above is a website i've been updating for about 4 months. I used to get about 50 veiws per day, which is good for a new website(especially a geocities one) but my website got hacked by some jerk.

Anyways, i've redone the site, but lost all my viewers, i used to get hords of emails from people telling me how funny it was,but i'm not too sure how funny the new site is.

Please read a bit of it and tell me what you think.

The Silver Bullet
08-11-03, 04:40 AM
Are you the nut that's linked a badly done cartoon called Ultimate Hans to my blog?

Just out of interest.

BEAR
08-12-03, 02:36 AM
I don't think so, bob. And wtf is a blog?

Sexy Celebrity
08-12-03, 06:44 AM
"My life is pretty much like a porno flick, only without the sex" ?

Feel free to kill yourself if this is true.

nebbit
08-13-03, 12:45 AM
No :rolleyes:

Herod
08-13-03, 01:02 AM
Did anyone actually follow that link and take a thorough look into the site?
Well, anyways: The site is mildly funny. The "random sh*t" section doesn't seem to contain anything besides you claiming you want to assault various celebrities, although I did find this amusing: "If you're an American, do me a favour. Bomb us. Bomb the hell out of us. C'mon, you're right beside us, we don't have any weapons of mass destruction, we have nothing. Bomb us and take our water or whatever. Do it for us, do it for yourselves, do it for the IQ average of the world, do it for the hell of it, just do it!"
The color scheme and site design definitely need some work, but I'd say that your humorous writing is by no means horrendous. But I think it would improve a lot if you broadened your range of topics to get angry about.

The Silver Bullet
08-13-03, 01:27 AM
Who the Hell does THIS (http://dan.drown.org/ultimate-mars.html) belong to then?

nebbit
08-13-03, 01:49 AM
Who the Hell does THIS (http://dan.drown.org/ultimate-mars.html) belong to then?

Cute :D not mine :eek:

nebbit
08-13-03, 01:52 AM
Did anyone actually follow that link and take a thorough look into the site?


You question me! I did look at the link and that was my opinion, :bawling:

blibblobblib
08-13-03, 10:39 PM
Well if were all shamelessly advertsing our own humurous sites.....Heres MINE! (And even if were not...HERES MINE!)

HERE - RIGHT HERE (http://www.geocities.com/fatmakersrus)

I started this site about 2 years ago. Just for fun of course...its not like its real or anything :laugh:.....:suspicious:

Gimme your photos and YOU can take part ;)

Kong
08-14-03, 02:12 AM
Who the Hell does THIS (http://dan.drown.org/ultimate-mars.html) belong to then?




Best










comic










ever!

Herod
08-14-03, 02:15 AM
It's like Friend Bear without the originality!

Henry The Kid
08-14-03, 02:21 AM
www.geocities.com/dansoddworld


Hey. The website above is a website i've been updating for about 4 months. I used to get about 50 veiws per day, which is good for a new website(especially a geocities one) but my website got hacked by some jerk.

Anyways, i've redone the site, but lost all my viewers, i used to get hords of emails from people telling me how funny it was,but i'm not too sure how funny the new site is.

Please read a bit of it and tell me what you think.


It's not bad. But get some new material, man. Everyone comes onto the internet to bitch about celebrities.

Furthermore, you do need to spell-check yourself a lot, if you plan on insulting. Most people who are looking for something to insult you about, will tear these apart.

Some of the humour is really bad, some of it is really good. Right now it appeals to mainly to people with certain mindsets.

Gracie
08-14-03, 09:42 AM
It's not bad. But get some new material, man. Everyone comes onto the internet to bitch about celebrities.

Furthermore, you do need to spell-check yourself a lot, if you plan on insulting. Most people who are looking for something to insult you about, will tear these apart.

Some of the humour is really bad, some of it is really good. Right now it appeals to mainly to people with certain mindsets.

I...didn't like it. I dunno know why, I just didn't. Too much needless swearing, also. And Conan O'Brien's cool! :(





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