Star Wars Episode 8 Rise Of The Jedi And The Order Of 6.

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Chapter One :The Story Of Rey.

Deep in space a large fleet If Star Destroyers was coming up on Yavin 4 moon base and it had different markings from General Hux . The lead ship was 3 times the size of Vaders Super Star Destroyer. The Fleet leveled based too rubble.

Rey had been on the unknown planet of the first jedi for 119 days and Luke had still remained silent as R2 was all those years. She was determined to get her answers and now Luke had the lightsaber so she had no guide too her past or the force she thought.

The Millenium Falcon left for Chewy got a request from home for his son Trench had became missing with his Pilot Jaina Solo. You See Jaina was Ben s twin sister but, she decided to not become a jedi but to fallow her father's footsteps.

"She had been searching for Zuril Voltress since her uncle Luke went into hiding. Voltress was the number one padwan and saved her life as a young child.

Chewy was having issues for han solo was his reason for who he became. A life debt too a wookiee does not end so easily and although he liked Rey it was not the same.

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The First Order Base was indeed destroyed but the Fleet in question was ran by General Thrawn. He was a a great commander and was stewarded by Govenor Tarkin. He escaped on one of the Smaller Star Destroyers after the battle above endor.

One of Thrawns first jobs for Supreme Leader Snoke was attacking Endor and wiping out those fuzzy little bear people.
Thrawn wears a necklace of Ewok teeth around his neck. On The View screen was communications from Lady Vera who was 3rd in power in the Knights Of Ren.
"By Order of Supreme Leader Snoke you are too wait for me and I will lead the campaign against Yavin 4 and Organa must be taken alive."
"As you wish but remember my dear Lady my clone soldier only are programmed to obey me even if they appear loyal to the First Order."

"I am not afraid of a commander from a past army who lost that war. "I would not boast about being able to defeat a bunch of teddy bears with sticks as something too fear. Snoke is not easily impressed." 'And yet he grovels too me from his perch all the same."

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The Falcon and Chewy with an R2 on board blasted to the outter rim planet of Geonsis. The very alien race that designed and Built the first death star. Chewy made a loud growl as he saw the downed ship by laser fire.

Chewy came out and investigated the smaller Corellian ship which was red in color but still required two pilots but it had automatic laser fire guns.
Chewy got out and investigated the wreckage and found nothing but he fallowed the tracks in the desert.

Down The line there were 7 dead geonsis locals dead and he could see a made shelter and he found there camp. They had made there post near a capsol that seemed too had been ejected from space pod and Jaina had dug it up when they were attacked and there beacon went out.

Chewy yelled and Trench talked back. "Dont blame Trench he was fallowing me. After dad died I knew there was only one person who could give us answers and so i back tracked everything i knew of." Jaina was black black haired like Ben was only she had straight long hair and was kinda short like Leia. She however had Han's knack for trouble.

R2 Came for he sensed the beacon number and he sent it back too Luke on the planet where he and Rey were."

It was Lukes first words in 121 days. "Is this possible but how in the world did he get from Jakku, Too Degabah too Geonosis." "Who are you talking about." Rey stood in the doorway of is meditation room which was down under ground some 3 feet. "Luke took a deep breath. Come here and sit down. I suppose it does involve you."

R2 opens the lock on the capsol and and opening up there was a carbonite body cell which had kept Z in suspended life which means the same 35 years old self.
At Resistence base BB8 also picked up R2 transmissions to Luke and played them for Leia.
"What is it you have found?" Zurik Voltress in a Carbonite cell and he is still alive but if we turn it on we are not sure he will live." My daughter bring him to Yavin 4." "Chewy speaks" "Lukes planet is closer mother." "Fine just get him away from a First Order Planet."

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They took the falcon for the ship would need repaired and Jaina looked back at her ship. "ILL come back for you again some day."
They had just left Geonosis when a few ships out of hyper space came. One large crusier with big guns and 5 fightser with hyper drive rings.

Chewy and Trench grawled and Jaina started going faster. "We cant lead these ships too Luke." "Land on Tatooine r2 give them the location beyond the dune sea."
The Falcon was trying to reach Tatooine. Aboard the cruiser in a secret room seemed to be a red hooded small in stature being in deep meditation. "Forgive me my master but we have investigated the Capsol beacon which has ended but we are closing on piece of space junk calling itself a ship." "Fallow you will but do not engage or harm anyone on the vessel. Our brother could be on the ship."

Leia went looking for Poe Dameron. We are going too evacuate yavin 4 and relocate too base too. I just have a feeling we have lingered in this base too long. I need you and Finn too find my Daughter her last transmission was near Geonsis close too the Tatooine system."

Poe and Finn took a two seated fighter ship and left for the Outer Rim.

Deep in Hyper Space The First Order Fleet was planning its attack on the Resistence. Lady Vera could since something in the force. "General we must go faster." "We are 7 parsecs away we are going as fast as we can. Be patient my Lady we will have enough blood soon enough."

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Luke was busy in meditation and he was quiet but he could sense her eyes from the doorway. "Did you ever hear the name of Yolanda Sing she was a great padwan.

She was strong with the force but had great patience. She ofcourse did not hear the call too the force until her son was born. She was already Married and had Twin Children Zurik, and Vera. Zurik took after the mother who was grand Daughter of Obi Wan Kenobi. Vera took after Voltress the first Knight Of Ren." "

"What happened too hear?" "I was away so i dont know the whole tale myself. Anyways Yolanda took the name Sing because it meant one with the force. She had such a gaze that it made most forget the dark side within them." Except ofcourse her first husband who gave her daughter over too Snoke as a test of loyalty. Zurik grew so angry he crushed his own fathers rib cage.
For Zurik if not for help teaching others . I think he would have fallen into madness. My wife your mother as well rests there and so you have a brother and a sister." "Why did you never come?"
"I tracked Zurik in several systems he took you that night and by the cunning of Z and the mercy of Ben you were not killed that night."

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It would be cool if you wrote this in a script format instead of a novel format. But maybe that is just a personal preference. I haven't read anything but script formats (and message board posts) for over 3 years.

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Else where Snoke sat alone upon his thrown with his old disfigured hidden by a hood. Snoke never traveled for he was too old and his body too fragile too deal with his enemies. He had great force power but like a very old Yoda did he used it sparingly.

Vader Killing Palpatine did Snoke a favor for he could never had beaten his former padwan. Snoke never used a saber his weapon was a staff with one side red the other was pure white light.
"Savage Ren come before me my student." A Very tall and poweful looking being came. He looked too be of the same race as the Lizard Bounty Hunters. "Yes my master what do you command. Leave the others too educate Kylo Ren you will go and kill once and for all Zurik." "Zurik cannot be alive and if he was that honor should be Lady Vera."

Snoke blasts him with force lightning that was a green color. "Do not dictate too me what i want done. Take you saber and go and kill him or turn him over too his so called brothers. Kylo Ren and The Girl is where a want them. One way of another I will have a new body." "What about Knight X?" "He will be of no concern for he cares not for his family. The monster is deep in madness. Skywalker saw too that for use when he helped use end Vader."

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The Falcon Landed on Tatooine and young Commander Solo made sure to land the ship on the out skirts away from any big settlement.

Only Tusken Raiders did they need too worry the ship about. However R2 left this gadget and Trench on the Falcon that would keep the raiders at bay.

Chewy had fixed the generator and Old Bens old home place had power once more. Jaina made the decision too unfreeze Z out of the Carbonite chamber.
The chamber activated and then Jaina noticed a laser blast started bleeding in his back area. Hurry chewy I need a medical capsol. They put together the simular chamber device you saw Luke in on Hoth.
Inside the chamber Z remembered things. He remembered a kind womens face and a little girl being born. He remembered a Smiling younger Ben Solo. "Your secret is safe with me." "As is yours my Padwan. I fear Luke would not understand my need too proove myself an equal master.
I am a Kenobi and training you will prove we both are Ready. He remembered more further down the line. "Ira you dont have too go things will get better." "You will not see he is evil and Ill not put her life in danger here." "I will tell Master Luke." "No you will not for you would lose your special chance too be a Jedi."
He then sees the face of his mother. "I here by kick you out of the order. You have broken the set rules." "I did not do anything less then the great master Luke did." "
He then remembers the Knights Of Ren ships landing and he kneels down at Ira s dead body."
He then hears a voice. "She chose poorly I fear my brother." "Vera do not speak or i will tear out your tongue through your chest." "You know my rule is not to fight blood my brother."
Z stands up and Blasts Vera with Force Lightning.
Z Finds Kylo Ren with the other Knights. Standing in the pouring Rain.
"So you hide yourself at last you Little Coward." "I am no coward i simply embraced my families destiny." "No my padwan you embraced the easy way and you garantee one thing for yourself. You chose the life of long lasting pain."
He then see s a young Rey with Rens hand on her shoulder. "We are taking the last Kenobi for my master will turn her." "No Ben your the one who will be leaving. And you did not bring enough men with you." Two Sabers activate and he remembers imagines and dismembered Knights Of Ren.
He is pulled out of his dreams with blinding flashes of light. His eyes are open and he see s the water of the life capsol tank.
He says nothing until he comes out dressed and sits down.
"Wear is the fleet chasing you."

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I hope we had lost those ships when we landed hear. Even though Jabba is dead his son Grill pretty much owns Tatooine and several places that once was owned by other bounty hunters and boss scavengers. His guards are still bounty hunters but also he has many battle droids he bought in bulk."
"Well when you make a no trail habit as I do Tatooine is the last place i would want too be. I am going too need a lift too a secret planet ill give R2 the location." Chewy speaks too him and Z looks too the left. "I cannot wait for the Resistence to find me old friend. You forget i am still wanted for high treason." "I am sure mother will fix that if you will help us."

"Well only if your not blamed for sending your star child too the dark side." Z however went over too old ben s old room and presses a button. He collects a holocron once from the jedi temple and a set of 5 cyber crystals in a jar.

He then sits down at a desk and takes out all things he would need and builds a New Green Light Saber and he comes out and turns it on. "I have forgotten what it was like too make one of these and feel it in one s hand." They leave for the Falcon. He hands Chewy a box for him too give too Luke.

They go into the ship and take off. They start too enter space but but there are several fighter ships in a blocking formation.
"Do cease all activity or we will fire on your ship." A Ship cruiser ship comes closer too snatch the Falcon up into it. Suddenly a Pod is fired and Jaina realizes that Z is gone.

They are taken before the 6 Cloked figures on the ship. The Small one sits in a chair and speaks. "You need no fear we will not harm you. Your mother if in very real Danger and we will help her if you tell us one simple thing. Is the child found that was lost under Skywalkers Care."

"Chewy speaks in wookiee and then we see a Wookiee step forward who looked too be older and he speaks. "He speaks in an old and tire growl too Chewbacca. "Chewbacca's father was thought lost years ago but stands before him with a blue saber.

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Luke and Rey arrive and all the ships are gone and so they landed on Tatooine and Luke investigated the old home of old Ben.

"This Planet is allot like where i was left so long ago. Oh Tatooine is a bit more dangerous for here its under s crime rule and in the old days the empire was around every corner. If you don't die of thurst you could fall in the sarlac pitt or killed by the sand people."

Atleast you maybe didnt have too scavange for Food for i heard stories about Skywalkers Aunt and Uncles death as too why you left too join the rebellion."

Luke goes through the chest. Old Ben s Kyber Crystals are gone and I had hoped to give you one too make your own light saber. Z has been here i can sense my old padwan. "Why would he come here then leave."

"He seems too be still Running but What makes you Run from your friends." "Maybe the same reasons you ignore your sisters plea's for help." "No that is not it for I did no one any good for I failed my promises." Luke and Rey leave but are stopped by a ship that looks allot like The Ghost. "It cannot be that ship and Crew died I was told when the Alderaan was destroyed."

"Seems like you stragglers could use a ride." Luke abandoned his ship and they went aboard the Ghost." "What are you doing here?" "Well thats allot longer story then I have time for. "I am taking you too a place even you have never been for there you will meet Yoda race and there rey can be trained."

"I cannot Train her." "Well I gotta get my army ready and get back to Yavin in time too save your sister form General Thrawn and his New Little Star Destroyer weapon." "We will go there first and help." "No I am on the run and I need too be caught as the assumed Sith That I am. Its the only way I can meet your friend Finn. When your are done Training I will send Chewbacca to pick you two up."

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They land on a Planet that was very much green but it was a moon. It had allot of water and land masses with Temples. The aliens lives in pole house on the large lake it appeared. On the biggest dry island near the moons largest temple was the jedi statue and home of a past master.

"This is the temple built to honor the Willows greatest champion Bontu Sitmus." "It never occured too me that Yoda home world was so far out into the outer rim.

"Your temple is important for there is something worth guarding there its just very well hidden. The very first jedi made that Temple and a single guardian would take care of the temple back in the old days. The larger temple was here. Before the Corusant Temple."

"This place feels familure like it was a dream I had. Then again any place but sand is better."

A Soldier comes out but he was dressed in blue and black Armor that resembled Clone armor.

Commander Sing you and two others will attend master Luke and his padwan." "Yes sir General then men stand ready there ships await you on the other side of the moon."

"These are clones Zurik." "Yes it was part of a secret project a former aquaintence did. I however myself paid for my own unit. These pacific clones were modeled after Captain Rex." "Can you trust them." "Well these are free thinking solider's not droids and in furture would ask them directly."

A Willow comes and he is a darker color green then yoda and he was missing one eye. "Ah Kiya." "I see you braught Ru's last padwan." "Ru is what they called Yoda and this is his youngest sister."

"Luke had not looked so perplexed in years since he met Obi Wan after R2 went too great lengths too fullfill his mission. "Can i ask you something about my mother." "Z turned and looked at her and he paused too a deep breath and looked out acrossed the water.

"Well she was quite young really." "Luke is my father and i guess have too remember my mother was his wife first." "I would not over load a master with questions. Take your time and remember in any training no matter how good you think you are. Be patient and remember too be a jedi you always gain knowledge and too be honest you train all ones life. However dont do the old ways and forget too let love into your heart.
Yes love can cause pain but some things are the will of the force even if it means bending rules laid down by crusty old men." He puts his hand on her shoulder.
She goes and talks too clone called Fox. "You didnt tell her the truth. But then again mother would be the ideal mother for a child."

"Its very painful to look at her for she reminds me of all things." "Remeber who's daughter she is and train her and you will discover she does not have an ounce of dark side in her like my mother."

Z leaves in a new fighter ship and he slowly starts too leave and looks down at rey and stops for a moment. He left me his Journal too read. "Do i have a right too read it." "Id wait a while too open any new distractions cause the training will be hard for being a jedi is more then hearing and seeing voices and turning on a lightsaber."

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The clone fleet lead by Z would enter the Yavin battle from behind the Star Destroyer Fleet. "Wont they sense us coming not it we manuver through the Asteroid Belt near the Hoth System and jump from there so fast that they dont know we are there."

"What is so important about the jakku girl?" "All you need too know Captain is if I am gone you are honor bound too serve her or stop her if she fallows the dark side." That is why you will be serving General Leia and General Calrisson." Else where on the far side of space in hyper space.

Lando and his ships were fallowing a pilots becon too Yavin and it was Lando s own daughter. Being a father had changed Lando from the scoundral he was. And when he heard about his old friend he knew he had waited long enough in hiding from this war.

The Loss of his wife and baby son was a demon he never really got over. He still carried his wife's necklace and a locket with his twin children's hair in it.

At Yavin Lando s Pilot had came and Finn in Hyperspace with Poe felt something strange and it was not Rey for some reason she sensed she was safe for now. He felt these things off and on ever since was 16 years old. "We need too turn around. I cant help but feel something bad is happening and we are going the wrong way." "The orders were clear to help the Generals Daughter. "Well yes but i think we should go back too Yavin and quickly." "If a doubted when the force was speaking too people i could no longer be a resistence pilot. We will turn around master jedi finn." "Stop that its clear Rey is the Jedi Not Me."

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The First Order Attacked The Small Squad and the cammand cruisers of the Resistence . It is time Admiral but keep The General Alive but kill the rest."

"Cammander charge the main gun and prepare to fir pulse cannon." Just then blast hits some of the other destroyers as The Order Of 6 Cruisers and the falcon leading the Black Squadron.

Who would dare attack this fleet and who is that fleet?" "It matters no Lady Vera my Fleet will not be beaten." "Who is that group of ships?" "Dont know but lets be glad for small miracles."

General Leia loved an cared about Z because He was a great friend too Her children and had a major role in the resistence until Luke moved his school. She however had a great since of blame and distrust in him. She would not Blame Luke but could his so called master.

Z's Ghost Squad came out of Hyperspace and flanked the first order from the left. "General we have some older ships coming out of hyper space but they are attacking the Destroyers."

"Keep On That Main ship. Do not engage the Order Of 6 for now for that is my problem." Finally Poe had returned too see a full fledge fight under way. "What in the world is going on?" "I now remember that ship. Or least the plans and if it charges the fight would be over."

Finn had a deep since of doubt about things. Saw himself as a failure. Z could feel something on the light side of the force. ""Prepare my shuttle Admiral cause my job is too deal with lost jedi and this one is beyond anyone the order has faced." Lady Vera Sing was trembling for her brother was one of the best saber users but she could since he was not himself. Or had not been the same in years.