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Toby, If I'd laid into Unicorn with more vicious gusto, I would have been instantly identified. And that doesn't suit me right now. Maybe later, if I feel positively satanic and I don't have all this work to do.
Hmmmm, craft, eh? I dunno. I just type a lot, eh, OG? Personally, I think you learn to write by reading. Voraciously. Read everything you can get your hands on: Saint Simon, Proust, Graves. In fact, I will tell you about one of the very first books I ever read that opened my eyes to "craft" -- FANNY HILL: MEMOIRS OF A WOMAN OF PLEASURE by John Cleland. When I was 14, I had found a terrifically nasty book called CANDY in me uncle's bookcase. Delighting in the juicy sexual descriptions, I carried it everywhere with me, and even marked the particularly sniggering passages with a ballpoint pen. (Yeah, stupid, I know, but I already knew how to footnote.)
Alas, after a prolonged bout of the sniggers in the hallway bathroom, my uncle caught me red-handed with this modern porno classic. But to my surprise, my uncle did not beat me. Instead, he handed me a very old Penguin edition of FANNY HILL and said, "I read this when I was 15. I figure if you want to find out about sex, at least, read something with class." And what a great book it was too! Sure, it was about the ornately libidinous doings of an 18th century courtesan but I'll be damned if I didn't learn about CRAFT! [To this day, my editor wonders where I got such telling phrases as "I am thy servant & lamia, Eve-fruit."]